Aka-Star's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Level Up Movie]

its alright

Nice idea but could be done a bit better I think

Toocool100 responds:

I agree, in the next version things will be drawn a whole lot better, thanks :)

[Mario versus Link]

hmmmm..

I've seen some better sprite movies that have been blamed :-/ it was very choppy graphics and the story was completly out of character. Link and DK friends? marrio eating dk? t.t I'm just surprised it didn't get blamed

ShibbyHoboJoe responds:

im surprised you didnt get banned for being an idiot, i mean, look at your "movie" ::pwned::

[Neon Catalyst Intro]

Needs work

Its very bland for a flash intro to a site, by that I mean the black and yellow lines is all that really is there. Need soemthing else, becuase I Wasn't highly impressed with what was there.

The music is nice and I see you tried to sync action to the beat which was a good attempt. But as I say I feel its missing a big thing to give it that wow factor.

neo-catalyst responds:

Dude, you talk as if I've been making flash for years. I know it's bland but it's the best I can do at the moment til I get more practise. But thanx for being honest though, and I will try to spice it up.

[All You Can Eat]

hmmm subject?

No body likes to listen to crazy old people in the street so why would they like to listen to one in a flash moive in the comfort of there own home?

It was okay at first but it just went on and on and on -_-

ratboy-labongo responds:

i've actually worked in halfway houses and dealt with these people. you make a valid point. it's not to everyone's taste. thanks for the review.

[*Clay* Fight]

omfg

was that it? I spent twice as long downloading it then seeing anything. I never understood what was going on in the first part - was hoping things would clear up but it just ended.

I strongly suggest reading up on compressing audio and bitmap if your only going to do clay movies. plus you might want a few extra frames, a decent stroyline and some sort of characters.

Chr0me responds:

well IF U READ WAT I SAID
i cant fit it in:| and i have no clue of how to compress audio and bitmap if anyone could please email me! geeze cut me some slack

[DEAD NES GAMES]

Yawn,,,

Sprites and speach bubbles, yuk...even the diaglog was poor - too much childish swearing.

Started out alright, but lost intrest very soon after.

seruvath responds:

Hah.. i really tried to cut back on the swearing while making it. My intention was to make a sprite movie to revive these games... a nice 3D animation with voice acting wasnt what i was looking for. Sometime watch the whole thing. thank you for your comments.

[FBF Violence]

a little most anitmation please

Didn't do anything for me, too short.

Livecorpse responds:

fair nuff, little practice thingie @_@

[A quickie...]

blah why bother

your stickmen look too stiff :P

review:
to short, nothing orginal not really worth watching imo.

mighty-max23 responds:

ok....